J&B Blue Program (John Locke)“Crafting a Creative Historical Essay” Highlights: J&B worked with the client to construct a 1,800-word, ten-paragraph essay for the John Locke Essay Competition, addressing the history prompt: “Should we judge those from the past using the standards of today? How will future historians judge us?” J&B worked on a three-person team and broke the project down into five steps. J&B consulted with the client at every step, offering a series of suggested revisions to help the client with structure, organization, flow, and clarity. Throughout the process, the client displayed their independence and creativity as a writer, which J&B helped the client better express through careful communication and collaboration. The Topic:J&B worked with the client on an essay for the John Locke Essay Competition. The client’s essay addressed the History category prompt: “Should we judge those from the past using the standards of today? How will future historians judge us?” J&B collaborated with the client to construct a 1,800-word, ten-paragraph essay that met the requirements of the John Locke Essay Competition. The Result: Finalist The Process:J&B split the consulting project into a series of five steps. J&B worked as a three-person team and provided the client with a detailed outline and two sets of revisions for the client’s drafts. Throughout the process, J&B worked to help the client structure and organize their claims, back up their analyses, and maintain an academic tone. After the client presented their first draft to J&B, they expressed an interest in re-structuring the arguments in their third claim, which J&B accommodated by helping the client connect their main ideas to the essay prompt. For the client’s second draft, they shared a desire to improve the flow, which J&B helped the client accomplish with a series of suggested revisions. At the end of the project, the client was satisfied with the final draft of their essay. Writing Style:As the client is a strong creative writer, they independently adapted J&B’s outline to craft an essay that expressed their original insights. The client approached the project with two major claims in mind and created the first draft of their essay utilizing several scholarly sources the client independently gathered as evidence for their claims. In their second draft, the client elaborated on their key ideas with in-depth analyses, while polishing their language. Throughout the entirety of the project, J&B consulted with the client to guide their interactive writing style and creative voice. J&B’s Key Goals: In-depth scholarly research Analysis Communication and collaboration Strong editing and revision Evaluation:Strengths: The client displayed a well-developed, original perspective and produced an essay with unique claims. Additionally, the client played close attention to the philosophical differences within their argument and defined the terms using their own words. The client also utilized an effective theoretical example in their thesis and referred back to it persuasively throughout the essay. Overall, the client offered relevant examples from history throughout the essay to support their arguments, creating an essay with substantial claims. Weaknesses: The client showed some difficulties structuring paragraphs with clear introductory and concluding sentences. Additionally, the client occasionally used the passive voice when writing. Furthermore, the client had some trouble remaining on track in their introduction and referring back to it in detail throughout their essay. When structuring essays, the client should be mindful of paragraph length and feel free to split longer paragraphs into two shorter paragraphs if they contain different ideas. 위 사례를 한국어로 확인 하기