J&B Blue Program (John Locke Prize Winner)“Law and Order: The ‘John Locke’ Unit ” Highlights: J&B worked with the client to produce a 1,*00-word essay for the John Locke Essay Competition addressing the Law prompt: “Should a hate crime be punished more severely than the same crime with different motives?” J&B split the project into five main steps including a pre-consulting session, a reading period, outlining process, a draft writing stage, and editing and revision. The team helped the client tackle a complex justice issue from an informed perspective, sharing relevant cases with the client they found helpful, especially as a potential future lawyer. The Topic:J&B worked with the client to produce a 1,*00-word essay for the John Locke Essay Competition addressing a prompt in the Law category: “Should a hate crime be punished more severely than the same crime with different motives?” The Result:Prize Winner The Process:J&B worked in a two-person team and split the project into five main steps. At the start of the project, the team conducted a pre-consulting session with the client to discuss potential prompts. As the client expressed an underlying interest in just one Law prompt, the team shared several relevant reading materials to help the client broaden their knowledge. J&B then shared a 7-page outline with the client which they used to prepare their first draft. The team edited and revised the client’s draft so that it would be ready for submission to John Locke well before the deadline. Writing Style:The client is a potential future lawyer with a strong passion for justice. Throughout the project, the team helped the client tackle a complicated justice issue from an informed perspective, sharing relevant cases with the client they found helpful while writing. From a technical standpoint, the team also helped the client with paraphrasing, transitions, and structural guidance, so that the client could use their final, polished essay as a model for future writing projects. J&B’s Key Goals: Key details Supporting evidence Clarity Editing and revision
