Highlights: J&B worked with the client on providing structural guidance and edits to the literature review section of their independent research project, preparing a 1,000-word body section complete with working references. The J&B team reviewed the client’s working draft and outline and came up with an editing plan to comprehensively boost their literature review section. To help the client create a stronger literature review section which they could expand upon at a later stage, the team focused on helping the client understand the structural breakdown of a paragraph, and where to insert key concepts and analyses. The Topic: J&B worked with the client on providing structural guidance and edits to the literature review section of their independent research project, preparing a 1,000-word body section complete with working references. The Process: At the start of the project, J&B carefully reviewed the client’s working draft, outline, and references, assessing areas that would benefit from elaboration or further scholarly exploration. After developing an editing plan, the team assisted the client with boosting their literature review section by creating topic sentences, paraphrasing, analyses, and concluding sentences that aligned with a modified thesis. Writing Style: The client is a passionate researcher, committed to understanding the nuances of their topic from a scholarly perspective. To help the client create a stronger literature review section which they could expand upon at a later stage, the team focused on helping the client understand the structural breakdown of a paragraph, and where they could incorporate the key concepts and analyses that drove their research project. J&B’s Key Goals: Editing and revision Scholarly research Paragraph structure Analyses of sources