J&B Blue Program (The Concord Review_Journal Publication)“Capturing Key Details for the Concord Review" Highlights: J&B worked with the client on a submission to the Concord Review. With J&B’s consultation, the client prepared a 5,000 word essay that explored a historical topic of the client’s choice. J&B worked in a three-person team and split the project into eight steps. At the start of the project, the client helped the client research and prepare the focus of their topic. J&B also broke the project down into sections containing introductory, body, and concluding paragraphs for more detailed guidance and support. As the client is a strong analytical writer, J&B helped them remove excess language in their drafts to create cohesive claims and arguments. J&B also assisted the client with transitions and paraphrasing using a series of suggestions, edits, and sample sentences. At the end of the project, the client was satisfied with the high quality of their final draft. The Topic:J&B consulted with the client on their submission to the Concord Review. The client prepared a 5,000 word essay that explored a historical topic of the client’s interest. The Process:J&B worked in a three-person team and completed the project within eight steps. At the start of the project, the client independently researched and prepared a topic which J&B helped the client narrow down to a tighter focus. At the beginning of the project, J&B provided the client with a detailed outline and numerous scholarly sources to further their knowledge of their topic, which the client utilized to create their subsequent drafts. J&B split the writing process down into steps focused on introductory, body, and concluding paragraphs to offer the client more elaborate feedback, suggestions, and guidance. Throughout the project, the client was satisfied with the support system provided by J&B. Writing Style:As the client is a strong analytical writer, J&B helped the client remove any excess content or language that distracted from their argument and claims. As the client also expressed that they wanted help with transitions while working on their drafts, J&B provided the client with a series of sample sentences and edits to highlight their key details. The client also required assistance incorporating sources into their analyses, so J&B carefully reviewed the client’s drafts and offered guidance on paraphrasing. At the end of the project, the client was highly satisfied with the high quality and content of their final draft. J&B’s Key Goals: Content revision Detailed research Editing and revising Technical support Evaluation: Strengths: The client independently presented an original topic and diligently engaged in researching the scholarly sources presented. The client created strong analyses and supported their claims with historical evidence. The client’s language was academic and their vocabulary choices were varied and complex throughout the entirety of the paper. The client was especially attentive to examining their topic from a unique angle. Weaknesses: The client displayed some difficulties properly citing their sources in in-text citations. Whenever quoting an author in academic writing, it is important to introduce the author along with the quote in order to cite where the material is coming from. Moreover, the client should practice paraphrasing quotes in order to smoothly incorporate information from authors into their claims and analyses. Additionally, the client occasionally utilized the passive rather than active voice throughout their essay.
